So here he is after a long procrastination period. I actually started building on the idea for this when the ttv video “Top 10 unused bionic concepts” was released, so hi has been in the works for a while.
Now for the personality: He is Ahkmou, the same as he was in G1.
Here is the backstory: He was originally a po matoran living in po metru. But he was deterrent then the other bla bla bla bla. You do not care about this. You want to know how he became a toa. Well that happened during makutas first world qoncuest. He was manipulated by one of makutas spies to transport weapons to and from makutas different frontlines. After proving himself in this job Makuta himself wanted to reward him and because Makuta knew of the past of Ahkmou he knew that he would be more useful as a spy then a weapons transporter. So when Ahkmou came to get his reward, which he thought was money, he was transformed into a shadow toa by makuta. After this he was very honored and swore an oath to Makuta. He swore that he would only report to him, only obey his commands and do everything in his power to help Makuta further his goals of world domination. Unfortunately for both Ahkmou and his master six toa defeated the armies of makuta and managed to defeat makuta and trap him in the void. But Ahkmou got away before the toa got to him and now he is plotting to bring back his master from the void and help him claim ultimate power once again.
The main thing that bugs me is the torso. It’s too short which also makes the arms look unnaturally long. I also think Vader’s CCBS shells don’t match. Overall I think you have some good ideas and that you should keep developing this moc.
thank you very much. Ya now that you mention it i see the problems with the torso. As for the legs i can’t really change them as i do not have any black shells in a large enough size except the cadre ones.
The arms are far too long, and the MOC suffers from exposed skeleton joints. You may want to revise the proportions as well, because they make Ahkmou look a bit feminine.
If it were a Toa of Earth, I might have bought the longer arms.
well i wanted to make him look like a metru toa since he is from there and those were the toa he would have seen and as such he thinks that is what a toa should look like.
the arms look long because the torso is short but i’ll fix that. Can you be more specific with what it is that makes him look feminin?
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