There are a lot of people I wish I could write like, too.
At the risk of sounding absurdly arrogant, and with all due respect to Greg, I guess this is at least in part one of the aims of the story. To be better at least, though "A million times better" is overdoing things a bit.
You've got it!
Indeed so. Admittedly I've been having some difficulty getting around to looking at some of the other fanfics on here, though once HF Mafia II ends, that may be alleviated somewhat.
I'm glad; that was the part I think I had the most difficult time with, trying to describe the biomechanical aspect without becoming muddled or just saying "biomechanical" outright. I'm glad it came out okay.
Neither can I.