Death Mech and Rescue: Good vs. Evil

[Ninja]

Pretty strange moc (the death mech that is) Blu summed up my thought basically, but I suggest to keep tweaking it until you think it looks amazing.

[Sammythekat]

Let’s tear in, shall we?

the legs on both look to be bending inwards, making for awkward posing
the coverage on both sets legs are very awkward, going for HF 2.0-style coverage
(have the shells pointing front instead of outwards)
This looks worse when the armor bits are added to the FRONT of the hips, thereby hindering movement.
also, thanks to the use of Vorox armor, they look like they’re wearing baggy pands on top of stick-thin legs.
the backs on both leave a lot to be desired
the nuva-shoulder heads look generic
also, the back legs need armor.

Overall, a 4.5/10
Generic, with a LOT left to be desired.
I suggest taking plenty of time to think things out, instead of slapping together a MOC like you did here.

EDIT:
New updates:
“Death”
ya tried with the shins, though not enough
all other issues apply.

“Rescue”
better shins, though it still looks awkward, and I doubt that there’s back armor.
all other issues apply.

Overall, 4.7/10
Trying, but not hard enough.

[Shadower]

I’ve rebooted Death Mech again, so here he is. Directed at @Sammythekat

Front

Back

[Omega_Tahu]

Make the shells on the upper legs face outwards instead of forward.

[Shadower]

Here you go, for the kajillionth time.

[Omega_Tahu]

Much better

[Shadower]

Thanks, any comments for rescue?

[Omega_Tahu]

For Rescue, do the same thing to the legs.

Also, as a whole, I feel that they’re too similar. It’s not bad, but I’d personally like it more if they had some more differences. Maybe adding more bulk to Death, and keeping Rescue the same.

[Shadower]

Okay, I’ve improved Death Mech again, now he is bulky but still looks good.
Front

Back

He also has more technic in him.

[Sammythekat]

OK. better back armor, still need back leg armor.

[Shadower]

Okay, I’ll get that going.

[Moa]

These names reming me of Slizer.

[Shadower]

Huh, I don’t really know that much about slizer.

[Moa]

Very good MOCs though.

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The Slizers always had names like “Jungle” or “Millennium”

[Sammythekat]

Throwbots had the more interesting names

Ski > Ice

Yea

Also, good idea for ya:

try and make a slizer-esque MOC- Capturing that kind of quirkiness.

Edited for double post -Prpl

[Moa]

Like Death Slizer and Rescue Slizer, using the same color scheme.

[Shadower]

Uhh, okay might be fun. @Sammythekat, here is Death Mech with back leg armour.

I had the idea to do a ccbs connection+armour.

[Xing1870]

Pretty basic, but a head of that size doesn’t work with this size body. I don’t get the hand spikes, they just look silly.

[Shadower]

The spikes are fingers.