How would you make a Female MOC?

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Better?

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no breast at all
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I actually think that looks kinda cool. The chest looks like it may interfere with the neck, though that could just be the angle of the picture.

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The chest-butt tho
Remove that and itā€™s an alright MOC.

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The problen
M is you canā€™t tell itā€™s a female

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Thatā€™s not entirely a bad thing. If you want it to look like a bulky humanoid, then it looks fine!

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Itā€™s supposed to look like a woman

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Male/female proportions are very similar, especially with the general body type you went with, so I see no issue.

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How to make a Female Moc in 4 steps

1-Nuva butt
2-Nuva bewbs
3-Rahkshi Head
4-Profit

/s

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@Toa_of_red_pins I just want to clarify that at no point have I ever meant to be rude, I was just trying to critique and may have been a little aggravated over time. I am sorry if it came off as that.

All I want to say is that you should take some of our critique into consideration, since me and the others such as @Chronicler are only trying to help you improve :smile:

That said, I can see your skills as a MOCist improving, and I truly hope they continue to improve, because I actually like most of your Skull Mistress MOC. :smile:

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Umm I donā€™t think thatā€™s the right phrase

Iā€™d suggest using Gali 2015 as a reference for female proportions in Bionicle

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Gali looks like a man as ive already stated

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Actually, she has a more feminine appearance that is very slight, such as having slimmer shoulders and slightly wider hips

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@Toa_of_red_pins, if you want to have a MOC with female-like proportions, Iā€™d recommend basing it off of this:

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Ok so we dont have another heated argument OK

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He is nowhere near hateful towards you, and to be honest, this whole drama revolving around your controversial MOCs is getting bit old. You seem to walk on very thin ice.

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What I recommend is to make a thinner torso (maybe with an hourglass figure), use a good looking mask (Breezā€™s helmets all work well) and, most importantly, donā€™t exaggerate the proportions.

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If youā€™re using CCBS the breakout torso piece is very helpful

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I like the bastardisation way more than the original phrase.[quote=ā€œArsenic, post:175, topic:15642ā€]
Donā€™t exaggerate the proportions.
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Weā€™re not sculpting Venus here; exaggeration is unavoidable with bonkles.

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I mean, donā€™t make it look ridiculous.

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Why not? Itā€™s your kronkiwongi.