Kodonnyk is an esteemed Xoriezeghian big-game rahi hunter, who met and befriended Leekkhahu when they were both hunting the same massive rahi. C&C are as always welcome and appreciated.
Decent enough MOC, but I've noticed that your names feel like you just mashed a bunch of letters together. Makes them hard to read and hard to remember.
I like the moc, It's a little simplistic but still good. Although I'm not sure if I like the un-matching epilets/shoulder armor
The names are that way on purpose, as it makes them very unique.
Fair enough; just keep in mind that it can be a blessing and a curse.
Perhaps you could do the mish-mash of letters first, and then make a more phonetic way to get the same sound. Like make this guy's name Kodonik instead of Kodonnyk.