Machine Wars - Escape from Cybertron (sign-up and OOC discussion)

[ProfSrlojohn]

Forager is getting a little power-drunk isn't he.

@Chromeharpoon

[Traykar]

I think his frustration is justified

[Chromeharpoon]

Forager is getting a little power-drunk isn't he.

Oh, indeed.

[ProfSrlojohn]

@Toa_Vladin when is the explosion over?

[BlackBeltGamer98]

Hey, Vladin? How far away are Transwarp and Scaleraker from the others?

[ProfSrlojohn]

How far away are Transwarp and Scaleraker from the others?

Just about to ask this.

[Toa_Vladin]

You really want to get back to the main group, do you?

[ProfSrlojohn]

main group, do you?

YES! Someone needs to get Beetle someone some help, and no one else seems to care.

[BlackBeltGamer98]

More that Transwarp likes having safety in numbers.

[ProfSrlojohn]

Can this:

Guys! You'll attract more Vehicons!

be how we find the group?

[Toa_Vladin]

You're still too far away for them.

[ProfSrlojohn]

You're still too far away for them.

ok. I can try.

[BlackBeltGamer98]

Wait, where's Starscream?

[Toa_Vladin]

In the remainings of the Seacon base, not too far away by where you should be.
Or at least there he was the last seen...

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OK guys. First of all I want to thank you all for sticking with my game for that much. So far the game really had just 2 unlunky days, but even then there were active players. I know that it isn't much, but for a guy who tried to become a GM so many times it really means something.
So. I made a few more polls. Some of the questions were asked before, some are new. I want you to vote for them.
Do you like the game?

• Yes
• No
• It's OK

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Do you think you had enough interaction time with other characters (note that just because you didn't opted to go for interaction doesn't mean that there weren’t occasions)?

• Yes
• No

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Are you invested in this world?

• Yes
• No
• Too soon to respond

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What do you think about my way of GM-ing?

• It's OK for a beginer
• You really need to try to polish it

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What do you think about the phasing?

• Too fastly phased
• Too slowly phased
• Just in the sweet spot

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Would you want me to try to give more interaction occasions for each of the characters?

• Yes
• No

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Is it easy to catch up?

• Yes
• No

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Do you want to see more of the Vehicon generals?

• No. They are just generic background bad guys.
• Yes

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Do you have any complains or ideas to improove it?

• Yes (please specify)
• No

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Was my grammar and English good so far?

• Yes
• No
• Tolerable

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Do you want me to try to think a small side story with an alternative Gobot universe, to better explore Dire's origin (@Traykar's vote is worth two votes).

• Yes
• No

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[BlackBeltGamer98]

I think the idea of going to Direwolf's universe is appealing but I don't know how in-character it would be for our guys to want to go there seeing as how they're going from one war into another if they do.

[Toa_Vladin]

@BlackBeltGamer98 I wasn't thinking at them going there.

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@Traykar @ProfSrlojohn I asked you to specify how I could improove it.

Also, this is for everybody: how was my grammar tolerable? I mean, other than typos like tge instead of the, I made sure to be as grammatically correct as possible.

[BlackBeltGamer98]

Typos are really the only issue you have that I see.

[ProfSrlojohn]

how I could improove it

For me, I just kinda feel like it's too easy. The fights are a piece of cake (except for Halfshell), and it was too easy to find the group when Scaleraker and Transwarp were wandering around.

[Toa_Vladin]

The fights are a piece of cake (except for Halfshel

Other than Halfshell there was only one other fight: the one against the drones, which was meant to be easy.

Scaleraker

That because you really wanted to get to tgem and.

[Traykar]

A lot of stuff feels scripted, like we're on rails almost.