Machine Wars - Escape from Cybertron (sign-up and OOC discussion)

Forager is getting a little power-drunk isn’t he.

@Chromeharpoon

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I think his frustration is justified

Oh, indeed.

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@Toa_Vladin when is the explosion over?

Hey, Vladin? How far away are Transwarp and Scaleraker from the others?

Just about to ask this.

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You really want to get back to the main group, do you?

YES! Someone needs to get Beetle someone some help, and no one else seems to care.

More that Transwarp likes having safety in numbers.

Can this:

Guys! You’ll attract more Vehicons!

be how we find the group?

You’re still too far away for them.

ok. I can try.

Wait, where’s Starscream?

In the remainings of the Seacon base, not too far away by where you should be.
Or at least there he was the last seen…


OK guys. First of all I want to thank you all for sticking with my game for that much. So far the game really had just 2 unlunky days, but even then there were active players. I know that it isn’t much, but for a guy who tried to become a GM so many times it really means something.
So. I made a few more polls. Some of the questions were asked before, some are new. I want you to vote for them.
Do you like the game?

  • Yes
  • No
  • It’s OK

0 voters

Do you think you had enough interaction time with other characters (note that just because you didn’t opted to go for interaction doesn’t mean that there weren’t occasions)?

  • Yes
  • No

0 voters

Are you invested in this world?

  • Yes
  • No
  • Too soon to respond

0 voters

What do you think about my way of GM-ing?

  • It’s OK for a beginer
  • You really need to try to polish it

0 voters

What do you think about the phasing?

  • Too fastly phased
  • Too slowly phased
  • Just in the sweet spot

0 voters

Would you want me to try to give more interaction occasions for each of the characters?

  • Yes
  • No

0 voters

Is it easy to catch up?

  • Yes
  • No

0 voters

Do you want to see more of the Vehicon generals?

  • No. They are just generic background bad guys.
  • Yes

0 voters

Do you have any complains or ideas to improove it?

  • Yes (please specify)
  • No

0 voters

Was my grammar and English good so far?

  • Yes
  • No
  • Tolerable

0 voters

Do you want me to try to think a small side story with an alternative Gobot universe, to better explore Dire’s origin (@Traykar’s vote is worth two votes).

  • Yes
  • No

0 voters

I think the idea of going to Direwolf’s universe is appealing but I don’t know how in-character it would be for our guys to want to go there seeing as how they’re going from one war into another if they do.

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@BlackBeltGamer98 I wasn’t thinking at them going there.


@Traykar @ProfSrlojohn I asked you to specify how I could improove it.

Also, this is for everybody: how was my grammar tolerable? I mean, other than typos like tge instead of the, I made sure to be as grammatically correct as possible.

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Typos are really the only issue you have that I see.

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For me, I just kinda feel like it’s too easy. The fights are a piece of cake (except for Halfshell), and it was too easy to find the group when Scaleraker and Transwarp were wandering around.

Other than Halfshell there was only one other fight: the one against the drones, which was meant to be easy.

That because you really wanted to get to tgem and.

A lot of stuff feels scripted, like we’re on rails almost.

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