I'm not sure that I like this very much. You used nuva shoulder plates as the chestpeice, an inika shoulder plate as the ahem buttock area, and a rahkshi head. It just seems a bit generic in that regard. The color scheme isn't bad, but it certainly isn't anything exceptional. The structure seems to have integrity, though, so I'll give it that. I don't want to seem like I hate the MOC, because I don't. It has some good qualities, but my recommendation is that you try not to make female characters overly feminine. That is not to say that you should not make them feminine, just don't go overboard. Keep MOCing, though, don't let my critique get you down!