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A kind old robot with wisdom and electric manipulation to boot

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I’ve seen lots of skinny MOCs in my day, but this one… this one has got to be the skinniest.

Granted, you could get away with that for this MOC since it is a robot. But to make that work, you’ve got to commit to making it feel robotic all the way through. Adding in more pistons and gears and whatnot.

Also the arms a bit too short (most human hands are located below the waist) and the colors are both boring and not spread out enough.

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hmm maybe some coloured wires
red, green, yellow, blue choose some of those

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could use some work…

proportions are off, too much ccbs, the color scheme is too simple…

other than that, it’s a great idea that can definitely be improved.

I do like that spine though. good job on that.

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Ok I see where you all are coming from but the intent was for him to be extremely skinny and smooth with a basic color scheme

I like the kind of split or remove arm design, It saves pieces as well as creates character. Although the legs seem to be a little unstable, perhaps try some Technic supports. I like the back of the build, although the front of the torso could use some more armor coverage, perhaps adding some ball-joint Technic pieces like these 2:




ETC.

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