Right heres the current state of my moc Sovereign. I am tempted to write up a backstory like the older “Sovereign the mask maker” but ever since then ive jumped around different ideas for a backstory and who he is as a character. I would say based on my mood writing this, he’s probably like a dictator (or you could say a sovereign i guess) fueled by a need to conquer more lands.
Really the only consistent thing is that he’s a bad guy.
(Also any weapon suggestions would be appreciated)
Actually, there’s a little bit of black scattered throughout the build, so it’s not all that out of place IMO. Furthermore the rarity of black on this also makes the mask stand out.
I feel like there’s not too much and not too little black on this to justify the mask.
I can see what your problem is with the upper arms. They’re a little gappy. Furthermore the shoulders have odd pointy ends, although I love the hunchback.
Personally, I’d just stick a black three-long pin into each of the exposed holes on the upper arms, and call it a day.
He already looks awesome enough as is.
This is excellent! all the red contrasted with the gold, and the Krakkaan to top it off, complemented with the dark inner-cloak. The scale is also impressive. Top notch, dude.
Cool moc, all the critiques I can see have already been pointed out. For a weapon I would use magic, he just seems like he would. If you don’t want magic than do a long thin sword.
Very noice! Gives off a rather hunchbacky strong, overlordy supreme eveil dude kind of vibe.
His gauntlets are very tasteful.
Collarbone armor look decent, but seem a bit off. Perhaps try restructuring it so two large spikes (CCBS) of armor extend past the shoulders. Kinda like this
If you have the extra money to spend, perhaps try and acquire a pearl gold Kraakhan off of Bricklink, or get the black one painted somehow? The black one works, but I feel that the black is a minor accent color throughout the MOC, and not enough is present to balance out the large blob of black that is the mask. (I would recommend painting it; that way, the mask can be mostly gold and have accents of red and small spikes of black; this would make the colorscheme flow very smoothly)
Neat! I really like the red and gold, makes him look like an emperor. The black mask is a little out of place, but it could easily be solved by say, adding some gold decorations to the back of head (look at me, the guy who barely knows anything about making good heads, saying that it would be easy! Lol).
I don’t think they did make the mask of shadows in the more modern shade. Feel free to correct me if I’m wrong, though.
