so here’s a moc i built of a king, a throne, and his pet. and i based is design on people with leprosy in ancient times, covering himself to hide the disease. so, some backstory: long ago there lived a benevolent king, who was loved by many. but one day he was poisoned by one of his servants, so he gathered many doctors and men of healing in secret. but all they could do was slow the rate that he was dying. deciding to hide his aliment from his people, he covered up all he could when in the eyes of his people. to prevent the people’s despair. now his only goal is to ensure his kingdom’s survival
anyway here’s the moc:
He’s pretty good, but frankly, some of the proportions (particularly when wearing armor) are not the best, and look a bit awkward. I dislike masks of control on huge MOCs because it’s such a tiny mask, and this is true here as well.
I do think that with some work, this MOC could be great. Keep trying!
I don’t like how skinny he is, and the green claws are out of place. Since those are the only green pieces on the entire moc, they stick out too much. I’d suggest replacing them with red claws.
I have the same opinion on the very skinny build and appearance, I don’t like the throne very much; sure the king can store his armor, but it’s still a gappy frame.
