Steve is just a normal guy, at lease that is what most people think. He is one of those people with voices in his head, except these aren't just voices they are actual people.
Steve was asleep, it was an hour before he had to wake up and start getting ready for school
Connor and the others were all together, in a white void.
USe quotes for speech
Use italics for thoughs
Keep fourth wall breaking to a minimiun
wach charater is his or her own charater, they do not have a hive mind, or telepathy, so they can not reach the thoughts of each other.