Before I start, I just like to say that I’ve never called myself an “artist” 
Anyways, I actually like how it turned out (aside from the mask and the fact that her arms are too short…). I tried to make her look like she had the basic “Metru-Build” to match Toa Lhikan. As you can see, I had to redraw the sword several times, just so it would be similar to the BIONICLEsector01 description of Tuyet’s barbed broadsword.
Thanks for viewing!
Hey, it’s better than I can do. 
Looks pretty good.
Very nice. One nitpick, is that she wears the mask of intangiblity, not a noble komau. (Admittedly said mask doesn’t have an image)
That’s simply because that’s the mask the model I used had (I probably won’t post that, since it’s just a basic Metru-Build), and, as you said, there’s no actual image of the Mask of Intangibility, so I kind of just picked a mask that looked good
It looks pretty good!
With any artwork, there’s always improvements to be made, but here I think the main things are proportions and cleaner lines.
Well done, and keep up tbe work!
I couldn’t agree more; the arms came out a lot shorter than I hoped, and as for the lines, I’ve never been that good at making the lines clear.
It could help to make a sort of skeleton before drawing in the body form and details.
That’s pretty much what I already do; I just accidentally made her arms too short this time
