Here is a main gripe I have. It's an opinion, so take it as such.
From places I've been and whatnot, when people collabed together. They usually waited for everyone to respond but I see that some people here don't have the same courtesy. Meaning, Meepinater was collabing with me, to essentially get the third omega key. Now, I do understand that this Roleplay has been going on for almost a year. But, that's what usually big Roleplays like this take. It wouldn't end in a few months, not if you want a good story and narrative.
If you take this narratively, what happened there with the Trials. It looks awkward and unreadable. Because, if you think about it from a story perspective. Why wasn't Scorchlock helping out? Why didn't he do something? Why did he wait so long?
Because, at the end of the day, Roleplaying is nothing more than writing a story with the characters you make. I think this is pretty much obvious, now personally I find it disrespectful if somebody doesn't wait for me, to reply in an important scene. Due to the fact, that I was busy and I couldn't muster motivation or time to do so. Essentially, if I had to wait till a few others replied to collab I was in, then so be it, however, I know that narratively and story-wise it looks decent, smooth, and not awkward if you get what I mean.
You always do ask for constructive criticism and feedback Chrome here is mine. Now I do realize if we'd do this, the RP would be even slower, because of different time zones and people having busy schedules. But if we don't do that, then why bother Roleplaying at all? Do you understand what I mean? Of course, we shouldn't do this every time we collab, but key moments like this. Getting the omega-key, I would have appreciated if y'all waited. Because I give and expect the same courtesy with me.
Again, this is an opinion, take it as such.