A bit of a Serious Poem

So I know not many people check out Literature, and I know I don't get serious all that often, but recent events prompted me to write this poem.


Deep inside it stirs,
Only I can sense its presence.
Where is my life going?
No one can say but I.

When did it all become less fun?
I used to love it all.
They would cry out my name
Happiness abounded in me.

Maybe I would still be there if I tried.
Even some effort would do.
Sadly, I cannot do this.
Oh if only they knew how little I do,
Never accomplishing anything,
Anything at all,
Killing myself one step at a time.

Perhaps I should give in,
Raise the white flag, throw in the towel.
A thousand years could not help me
I have failed so many times,
So many times, but they all end,
End in failure.

So why do I continue?
Only for others.
Let myself be consumed,
Eliminate this body,
Kill me in the name of the people.


So yeah, hopefully I didn't ruin your day or anything.
Also, you might want to read the first letter of each line :wink:

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Nice poem, but, are you okay dude?

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that was a beautiful poem

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That may have been the single simultaneously saddest, hilarious, and interesting thing I've read all day. Ten outa ten.

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There are no words.

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Truly touching.

And that is true, unfortunately almost nobody seems to check the literature topics.

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I'm not quite sure how much of this is serious, and how much is goofy Slime, but I think you could write some real good stuff, serious, dark stuff...

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That was deep. In fact, the deepest thing in the Literature Topic.

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Clever.

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"Down with Mesonak"?! BURN HIM!!!


This is actually a very sad poem.

So... would you be offended/insulted if I treated this with sarcasm or not?

Remember, if you need to express yourself more explicitly, we're here for you, and I'm sure some or most of us have gone through a similar situation. I think I have.
Edit:

I have no idea about how you see this but according to my place in my life, this is beautiful

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i r8 8/8 gr8 b8 m8

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sure

FTFY

danke

Then what did you read?

nobody includes me
No but in all seriousness, I do actually check out the Literature Topics. They just require a lot more time and dedication, so I usually save them for last on my unreads/news.

I guess so. Never really considered it.

Is it deeper than the bottomless pit that is @Nyran's ego? :stuck_out_tongue:

wait what

"Hey Meso, remember that one time you messed up the Episode Number? OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH"

It depends on your definition of sarcasm.

tnx mx

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Hey, I'll have you know, that I

am awesome.

However many things I've said in the past, my ego has skyrocketed!

Additionally, nice poem.


Only a matter of time though.

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ftfy

also gud job

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Oh

I forgot a caps.

RIP.

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Well if your feeling down life, here is my simple solution: Ignore the negative feelings. Just straight up ignore and drop them. And then proceed to move on with life.

It's what I do on a regular basis. How do you think I've stayed on the message boards for so long when my topics always get mixed reception?

Also: "Down with Mesonak, Praise Solek"... Yeah, this really throws the poem out of orbit. It really confuses the message of the poem.

I give this Poem a 5/10. Seriously, the secret message is really confusing me. And it clashes with the main message of the poem. Plus the poem looks a little...sloppy...in my opinion.

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Solek spam. Must delete.

MUST DELETE.

MUST DELETE.

MUST DELETE

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It was clever once, but a Youtube comment beat you to it. Don't follow his example, guys.