hm
a guy named archer, with two swords and a bow
sounds familiar
eitherway he looks alright
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I am the bone of my planned fanfiction (description of this Archer (Main/Title pic) | Archer is the Archer-class Servant… | Flickr).
But he’s not Shirou, nor anything like him. He doesn’t actually use those blades, ever, nor are they mentioned, I just put them there hoping somebody like you would prod me about it, truth be told. Servant Archer, though, you’re right.
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@LelouchViBritannia would also like this. Or atleast get the references and stuff
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I believe so, but he has some misconceptions about who the best girl is.
=P
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let’s…uh…
let’s take the Fate/Stay Night discussion here
otherwise I think the moc’s alright. D’you think there should be more silver and dark yellow/keetorange/whatever you call it on there? Not to say there’s anything wrong. Also I think the bow could be abit bigger
I was kidding anyway, but totally checking out that topic.I think the bow could have been bigger, yeah, you’re certainly right on that one. The keet is color layered pretty alright, but I should look into adding more silver. Thanks for the feedback!
Let’s take this outside. Of this one specific topic.
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Thumbs up for use of:
CHAINS!
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I don’t want you to get the wrong idea, I like the moc itself.
those weapons are bad,
the bow looks broken,
those blades are ridiculously unwieldy, no wonder he keeps losing with them.
I would just make a blade-edged bow,
like this
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Are they truly so uncommon?
Hmm. I like the bow myself, but I have no arguments so I’ll agree that it need work. As for the blades… I’m not so sure. They should be decent weapons for blocking if their bizarre hilt is firm, and they’re not really offensive. Think of them as Archer’s way of training himself, via hardship, so to speak. Then again, that’s a weak argument in most people’s eyes so again, I do not disagree. Thanks for your critique, I’ll be using it when I make the next version.
This is very cool
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Looks awesome. I love bows xD. I like the cape, maybe attach it to the shoulders or the collar bone like Batman :/.
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“literally channeled MOCpages in a MOC”
-Sean misusing the word literally while also mentioning his main source of inspiration
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The build and color assortment look really cool. 8/8
Such, awesome. Very nice job here!
That’s actually really cool!
12/10!
This guy looks amazing, I love it. The swords are really cool, but the bow looks really weird (Bad) to me. Also, why the elastic bands on the cape/cloak/robe?
Overall rating:
4.5/5
Thank you, everyone. Your praises have inflated Archer’s ego tenfold.
I’ve got this itchy feeling that you really do not like Archer, Stormy.
And I’ll be honest. I use ‘literally’ like a white girl on tumblr.
Oh, and citing my “main source of inspiration” would be more correct.
bangbang
shots fired
This is the most interesting comment so far, because I find the latter half of your critique very strange. That’s not to say it’s invalid.
The bow, yeah, I wasn’t really going for a traditional recurve bow feel and I see now that that did not work out for me. I’ll see to that for the next version.
The thing that I wish for the cloth to be, I do not know the name for, but it’s comparable to the brown cloth that Boba Fett is often portrayed with. It’s not a cape, cloak nor robe, and just something draped over his left shoulder. The rubber bands are there to ensure that it stays to one side and is cramped nicely together to give it the feel I wanted. Not to say I got it perfect, either. The red one, though, has absolutely no business being there nor is needed, so frankly I have no idea why I didn’t remove it before taking pictures.
Thank you very much for the critique, it will prove invaluable for the making of the next version.
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Simple look and feel, yet has a complex build. Amazing work!
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And with that, good sir, you’ve made my day and I can rest easy knowing what I set out for in my self-MOC has finally been accomplished.
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