I eventually plan on having this coloured and inked in. ^-^
Lol, I just now realised how thin Imade her arms. XD Gotta fix dat later. 
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Her head is a bit big. Perhaps make the shoulders a bit far more out and her arms a bit thicker.
You’ve made her look cute. Well done.
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I know, I’ve been trying to counteract that. XD Lol, I’m gonna work on that. 
@RangerSilver6 Why thank you. ^-^
Edited for Double Post. ~Chronicler
She’s BOODIFUL
I’m sorry, but she looks like
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I could never draw her.
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More feminine than usual.
Lol, thank you. ^-^
@Chronicler Does this look better:
I’m still working on the arms, so I’ll try to thicken 'em out.
Also, @Ekorak Thanks. ^-^
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Huh. Neato. I like this style.
Doesn’t look like the shoulders are any farther. That’s the thing about proportions of human-like figures: You need to make sure they match to human proportions. The shoulders should be a bit more farther out, with the torso following it in length. You may want your female to be thin, and I get that, but they have to have thickness. Without the torso being bigger than the head, the head looks way too big.
They most definitely are out farther, I made sure of that. Apologies if this sounds a bit rude, but you’ve basically relayed me information that I already know. My issue is that I suck at art, I try to do things like that, but it never reallyturns out looking good. XD Also, should her left hand have her trident or no?
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Maybe… But that’s your decision. It may help with making the proportions a little better, if you can pull it off right.
Lol I probably will since I’ve already finished the arms and am about start to ink & colour it in. ^-^
Comic stile thats semi-realistic? Thats cool and would like to use thats style. Someday… for now i wil stick with cartoonish style!
Looks. good. Not to be rude, but the head is still big. Perhaps if you ever attempt her again, you can fix this.
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You’re not being rude. ^-^ Trust me, it bugs me just as much as it does you. XD
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Actually I like the head larger. I think it maker her somehow…cute. Kinda like a bobble head. Nice work!
Why thank you! ^-^
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Very cool! Is it just me or does she have bug eyes? 
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XD That comment made my day. ^-^ Lol, just a lil’ bit.
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It actually gives me the impression she’s wearing a helmet of some sort like a Kamen Rider of the old days. Namely Ichigo himself or maybe Stronger.
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