[Version 3] I’m super happy with all the feedback everyone has given me! Here is hopefully the last batch of tweaks before the contest ends. My schedule is kinda hectic so I’m shooting a moving target here.
Removed the hose intakes on the mask to give it a more streamlined look.
Sealed the front visor to match the concept and illustration.
That’s such an epic drawing, the mask design is the best yet imo. That’s a pity that it can’t participate, since you didn’t provide the picture of the mask’s front/side/top view (There’s this rule in the contest’s rule list)
You’ve managed to make it even better! What a tremendous art! I love the colors, the stance, the expression on the mask, the angles, the texture, the location - everything.
This trully is wonderful piece! The lighting, the alien birds in the background…
The only thing is the mask - it fits really well with the design of the MOC, I just don’t like how it looks (as a mask). That is just a personal preference, though, great job!
There’s not much I can add to this that hasn’t already been said. If most of the other works are destroyers, this is a dreadnought. I’m not a personal fan of the mask’s overall design, but I like the “wings” reminiscent of Technic panel fairings. My first exposure to that family of LEGO pieces was the MNOG boat, and it’s been one of my favorite pieces ever since.