Bionicle G4 Year 1 episode 1 The Mata Nui trilogy: The arrive

Ok, so I previously make a topic with an idea for Brickonicle and I said that I want to make a series. Then I said I give up, and the topic was closed. So, here is my try to make a relevant series for G4, if Brickonicle will fail. Please don't close it!

He look around him.
He was in a pit of sand. He looked in his back. A big canister with two red swords. He take the swords. He like them.
- Who am I? He asked.
He exit from the pit. He was on a beach.
- A island? Maybe I will find a village somewhere.

Agni was bored. He was at his jab, at Ta –Koro guard. He really wanted some action, over he saw
him. He looked at Kapura who was next to him.
- Kapura? Are you see what I see.
- What is that thing?
- I don’t know. It look like a Matoran, but bigger.
- It is a Rahi?
- No, I don’t think so…
- Hey! Outsider! Can you talk?
- Yes! The outsider sad.
- What are you, stranger? Agni asked.
- What?
- What are you? A Matoran, a Rahi?
- I don’t know!
- You don’t know what you are?
- No.
Agni and Kapura started to laugh.
- Then, what is your name?
- I don’t know!
- OK, I Don’t Know! Why are you here?
- Let me guess, you don’t know.
- Exactly! I awake myself into a pit, with a canister. There I find those!
The stranger take his sword from the back. Kapura and Agni take the Guard Staffs.
- Wait, I Don’t Know! You can’t attack us only because we were playing with you!
- What are you.
- Really, stop the game.
- I am not joking anymore! What and who are you?
- We are just two Ta-Matorans! Please don’t hurt us!
- Enough! An old voice said.
The stranger looked next to him and saw an old man, with an orange mask and a red staff.
- Who are you? The stranger sad.
- I am Turaga Vakama, the leader of the Ta-Koro. And you, need to come to my hut.

The stranger come to Vakama’s hut. It was full with mystical things and there was a big fire.
- Do you want some Kebaya tea?
- No thanks.
- You want some answers, right?
- Yes.
- Ok, what is your first question?
- Who am I?
- You are Tahu, the Toa Mata of Fire.
- What?
- Second question.
- What is a Toa?
- A Toa is an elemental hero who was born to complete a destiny. Every Toa have an element.
Your element is fire. Third?
- What is my destiny.
Vakama looked at the fire.
- You fell from the sky in a Toa Canister along with five other Toa: Gali, Pohatu, Kopaka, Onua and
Lewa. They are with the other Turaga in their regions.
- So, what is our destiny?
- It is a long story. You need to be quiet.

Enjoy!

Good opening but I personally think that Vakama should stay in the G1 story line.

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