Well, this is my first post on TTV and I’m kind of nervous that I’ll be breaking some secret taboo or something. Anyway, I would love a critique if anyone has the time.
Front:
Back:
Action Shot:
Transformation 1:
Transformation 2:
Transformation 3:
Any backstory or anything? I’m curious as to why he becomes a sword. Good MOC, although if you want professional criticism talk to @Ekorak or someone, but yeah!
Oh, probably should have mentioned it somewhere, but he’s a spirit possessing a sword.
should I just private message him or is there a better way, thanks for the tip 
Nah, just wait. He’ll come sooner or later.
ok, thanks man
No problem, welcome to the Boards!
chestfist 10/10
AHEM
I was summoned
Actually this thing is pretty cool. The legs are pretty good, but the torso and arms are…meh. I like the orange and yellow things on the back, too.
The torso and arms just feel lanky and unfinished.
Which is a shame, because I like seeing the general concept of Ek’s chest design on other stuff.
Honestly, keep the waist down, and redesign the torso and arms, and you’ll be talking some slick stuff.
One last thing of note is that while it looks good, the Protector mask is already becoming the next Rahkshi head. It’s generic and overused. May want to change that in the future.
Oh, hey. The ritual worked.
Thanks for the review, I really appreciate it. But the protector mask? I thought that no one would use them, they have a thin nose, two colors, it leaves some of the head open and overall looks kinda gimmicky. If it gets too bad, I guess I’ll change it to the fire agori head or something.
Anyway, thanks for the help 
man
this’ sick
The back is creative and a great us of those tube pieces, good job…
The concept reminds me of Ghirahim. Which is awesome.
Awesome! nice idea too!
he needs to have a bit of light armour around her to make her less bare
cool I like It 
Her?
actually, it’s a guy. I know a lot of people are using a similar design, using 2010 fists as (something TTV won’t let me say :P), but I didn’t really think it looked like that. And I am planing a slight upgrade as we speak 
Very cool. I like the use of the claws and the mask, as well as the torso. It looks like it is something that would be used in a ManiaMac1316 video, which is a good thing. Gets my seal of approval
i just saw my comment started with he then went with her so you could say he/she is a Transgender
This is really cool!
I liek it a lot, though I wish you had made the demon have more gold to look like the blade.
Thanks man
I was thinking of giving him golden gauntlets and maybe a gold mask, if I ever revamp him.
