Hey guys, I got another MOC up. Tell me what you think.
- I like the color scheme
- It looks a bit cluttered by the armor and the way things are placed throughout
- Nice weapons
- Good back coverage
- Unique design
- Not too sure I like the head. Feels narrow and sort of boxy in areas.
Overall, I give this a 7.5/10. Really cool MOC!
I was going for a very odd look so I added more detail peices then I normally would... I think it backfired on me though
Thanks for the review!
Really nice, especially like the curvy torso. The world needs more curvy torsos.
Plural's Quick Review:
- Color Scheme is OK, but the Addition of Light Blue is Meh
- Calves Build are pretty Sheet
- Open Balljoint on back is Meh
- The Chest itself is rather cluttered
- Thighs seem to stick out too far
- Spear coming from the Back of the head is Meh
- The Black Seems non existent in the lower body; maybe if you add a bit more in the legs and arms
- Kopaka Blades on the Torso look a bit out of place; Open pins on them also look Meh
I would give this MOC an overall rating of a 6/10.
Needs a Bit of Work
I don't know if the top of his torso is supposed to be color blocking but it still looks cool.
This MOC is great!
Here's a fake cookie
Yellow is a good accent.
You mimic armor well with kopaka blades.
Shield is sweet.
System head is defined.
Sword feels off.
I love this! The weapons are really good, and the yellow accents look fantastic. I am not the biggest fan of the head, but I don't think it looks bad. Great work.
Thanks for the critiques! I'm fixing this guy up right now. I'll probably post it in a few days.
...sorry plural, the blue's here to stay maybe...
EDIT: @MSEP Thanks man
That. Shield. Is. So. Sick. 9/9 g9 j9 m9 n9ran.
Liek if you cry every time.
Yo it's no problem man. I look forward to the update in a few days!
The head is great in my opinion (minus the HF eye)
Btw, the HF piece is there because I'm making a group of MOCs that have them on different places.I have on in the heart-light position and one on the neck so far. But yeah, It does look really weird by itself
Here's a link to the other on I have on site
This looks really good.