Brotherhood of Makuta-- Makuta Troodax

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So this is the Makuta killed by Zaria who I decided to call Troodax he is the BREAKER OF MINDS.
Name: Troodax
Assigned region: Unknown Island located in hip section of Great Spirit Robot
Kanohi: Mask of Telepathy
Status: Deceased-- Corpse is on the surface of Spherus Magna

Onto the pics

This is the obligatory action pose.


This is him from the front and he is not as small as his head makes him look.


I’ll shut up now.


This is his Staff of Mindbreaking

I have a Toa of Iron that may or may not be stealing/is Zaria who shall be seen at some point

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Hm, he’s interesting, but he is pretty much a rearranged Fire Lord…

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Nice concept, but like @PakariNation99 said, try to deviate from the basic HF titan build palette.

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For one please put this in and fill it in
Name:
Assigned region:
Kanohi:
Status:
It just helps, and will be on all entries, also yah it is fire lord sorry man

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No it’s not rearranged fire lord it’s rearranged Rocka XL and I simply don’t have the parts for anything else other than this

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Pros:

-Fair color scheme
-Staff tip is good

Cons:

-Leg gap
-Need different hands
-Back could of been better but-

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Man, I’m sorry, but those legs are so terribly proportioned. Might wanna improve that.

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Working on it

I don’t use custom or Glatorian hands. I use Mata hands for all my Bionicles

Edited for Double Post - Wsj

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@Whovian41110

While I can’t say if he’s a rearranged Hero Factory Set, because I mostly ignored that theme, here are my thoughts:

  • I really like that staff
  • arms and upper torso are ok
  • lower torso, especially the hips look … you really should try to make them look better
  • legs strongly remind me of Black Phantom, whom I have, they could perhaps be more customized

Otherwise, I like his Name and that “Breaker of Minds” byname. But you should perhaps come up with a story up to the point where Zaria kills him.
Oh, and his Status should be “Dead”. After all, he was killed.

Thank you for participating!

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Right… I’ll fix that

Does this look better?


There’s his new back armor

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@Whovian41110

Well, I’m not sure about that Stronius armor on the legs, but it works on the back and the hip additions help a lot, too.

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So does the leg look better with or w/out the Stronius armor?

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The legs look much more complete now, as is the back. :thumbsup:

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Now the arms look tiny :joy:

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What about now

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I think you need to make the shoulders a little broader. Arms should be scaled up a little bit more.

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Dangit! I finish my Makuta MOC, and someone beat me to it! gg

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Somehow the wings and shoulder attachments help a lot by distracting fom the hips and a little too bulky legs.

I have, to say, Troodax constantly gets better.

You should think about writing some kind of story for him.

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Looks pretty good, but you may want to bulk up the arms and torso.

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I am doing that with my custom Toa team’s story

And now Version 4.0 [internal]Hopefully final version…[/internal]
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His shoulders are now wider.


The back of his legs are also armored as well with some Technic