this critique will be pretty harsh.
they are alright, they are simple, but get the job done I guess
on the otherhand, the colours already seem off
Just from the weapons
I see light grey, gunmetal, silver, gold and yellow!
Next up, the build
its a standard toa build, what can I s-
sees the arms
proportions on this moc are extreeeeemely off, shorten those arms,
they look horrible, can the gear function even work!?
Now at this point, I will be going real harsh, because now its time to get into the colourscheme and mask (and mask abilities)
Colourscheme is horrible
really horrible, I mean, its an eyesore, try to stick with one/two main colour/s (usually these are the colours the toa mostly use) , one accent colour (usually gold or silver, or gunmetal), and one/zero trans colours
gold and silver usually do not mix
next, is the mask
mask of awesome sauce
it isn't an element, or ability, I suggest making it an element if its a g2 moc, or a legit ability if its a g1 moc
as for the abilities
Please oh please change it to something less op, specially since this is a SELF moc
I suggest like I stated before, a main element, or something like that
also, I understand you are most likely real little, or something
2 years ago I would have made something along these lines and called it awesome.
actually, 8 months ago I would have made something like this and called it awesome.
Final score: 3.5/10
take what I said, and start by making a toa sized moc, with a unique colourscheme that does not look bad, and good proportions, then I feel like it will deserve a 5/10 or a 6/10
I really hope you will not get offended.