Dafora the mermaid

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It actually doesn’t look bad.

In fact, I’d say it’s pretty freakin’ good.

The torso and arms look pretty nice with one another, with the spikes on the arms serving as a nice tie between the yellows.

The point where the tail and the body ties together is a bit meh, but the tail itself doesn’t look that bad.

Nice job, man.

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Excluding the description, I’d say this is actually pretty good! The only thing I’d change is the horns on the armor.

? When did I type thay

It’s in your gibberish, which I would ask you to delete and add an ACTUAL description.

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Other than the description, I like this.

Well, it’s better than your other creations. I don’t like the tail.

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Only thing to complain about is that the waist is a little too small.

Other than that, this is ok.

How many MOCs do you post a day?

I do see improvement in your work, and I cant wait to see you get even better

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this is pretty cool.

good work :slight_smile:

I enjoy the tail the most, but I feel if is was a little bigger where it connects to the torso it with look a little more natural in terms of flowing as one.

Letme answer that question with a question how many moc have you seen by me

Better than the rest of your creations for sure…still there are some flaws that are worth a mention, however they were already mentioned above.

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Maybe it could use a little bit more bulk where the tale meats the body.

Um… about all of them.

I don’t like this attitude you’ve adopted.

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FTFY, dude.

The shaping is a little incoherent on the tail but the problem is minial.

I love how you made the end of the tail!