Never question the notification
anyway how did you enjoy it
Never question the notification
anyway how did you enjoy it
Havenāt read it yet
Will soonā¦ maybe Iāve got a ton of work to do
you will need to update it, as it contains nothing about Kutin, and places that will undoubtedly come in the future. until then itās really unneeded information about unvisited places. seems interesting though
It has been Dormant but I will be getting it back in buisness
Actually. The reason I brought it up was because I take issue with the statement alone. I like violence.
another ābookā to read, I hope I donāt mix themā¦
@Whaddon Yeahhhhhh. I donāt know what they say becauseā¦ I canāt look atā¦ogg?
Itās fine that itās building tension. Iām just saying that I disagree with the statement itself.
Okay
I will be doing the second chapter soon
Interested to see it. Please excuse my sad attempt at humor.
######Yes that was humor
Why do people summon me to literature topics? Do they think me a good literary critic or something? XD
That aside, thereās dark and mysterious, then thereās confusing and strange. The same scene, with the same info, can be either depending on how itās written. This story borders on the latter, simply due to the amount of detail and the way itās presented. The wording of a documentary and the scene itself do not jive.
The first paragraph seems like some random info. The second paragraph is great. The third is a good illustration of my above point. The final paragraph is okay.
That aside, my only other point is that the sentence structure is rather odd sometimes.
~W12~