Devrilo Orius

Disclaimer: This is the second version of this MOC, only did slight adjustments but the appearance shifted quite a bit… By the way, this is my interpration of a Mobile Suit in Gundam so in no way does it relate to the Bionicle Universe but it’s still made of the same pieces so does that count? Eh oh well here’s a second go!
(I added Orius on the end because it’s similar to what happened to barbatos when it became Barbatos Lupus- Teehee)

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The chest is a little bulky, but not a bad start.

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Thanks, also the chest is supposed to be broader as I focused on that as a main view point but I get where you’re coming from. Again thanks

… buff riku?

It’s way too cluttered.

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The head is still too small, and the armor doesn’t flow well.

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@Payinku by that do you mean that it had too much stuff and not enough space?

@Omega_Tahu I don’t really wanna change the head because it’s one I’ve been using for a long time but where does the armour not flow?

I mean that there’s a lot of textures and parts with little cohesion, there needs to be a flow with the parts so that it looks like a solid being rather than a bunch of parts.

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This looks pretty cool! I like the design!

@Payinku Oh I get it yeah I guess I see where you’re coming from but from my view that is how I was planning it as, since it’s supposed to be a frame that armour pieces are attached to but maybe I could change that a little? I’ll play around with it.

@decepticonaiden Thanks! Appreciate it

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I don’t know… I don’t see why the gold shouldn’t just be replaced with silver. Cool concept but a little too messy.

Too many colors and kina messy

@Kidnapped_Sock @LTVmocs Yeah well I read these comments and maybe took them a bit far with the colour part but here’s what I did not sure if it’s still too messy though. Personally I think he looks a bit like Ironhide but that might just be me…

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Looks better

Cheers all thanks to your feedback though, the colours look a lot better in my opinion and honestly, don’t even know why I tried white. Eh looks decent now so thanks again.

Fix the armor set up on the forearms, and give him a bigger (and possibly brick-built) head, and you’ll have your self a stellar mecha-hulk!

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@darkbrick999 I like that thinking tho the head may be hard, I’ll try it when I can though!

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The armor doesn’t flow in the fact that one piece will slope down and another will stick out. It just seems uneven, and the back looks meh. My opinion about the head hasn’t changed either.

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@Omega_Tahu Alright then

Man this is a beast! Really like it, but if I had to change anything it wouldn’t be the arms as they are a little too small and thin for the rest of the figure.

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@ThatchMac Yeah I lost some parts at the end but I’ll beef them up a bit when I get the parts

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