Elemental Powers Poem?

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Fire’s pretty hot,
While ice is just so cool,
Air makes me want to quick-sprint,
To the little water pool.

Earth is good for crops,
While stone just will not break,
Light has mixed with Shadow,
In Makuta’s protodermis lake.

Electricity will fry you,
Iron can keep you safe,
Sonics are pretty noisy,
And Gravity may make you chafe.

Magnetism is a thief’s best friend,
While Plasma is your end,
Plantlife grows the trees,
And Psionics see whatever they please.

Creation, Time, and Life,
Are legends to behold,
Creation and Life make new things,
And time never grows old.

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Is it bad that I rapped it in my head?

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No, I did that too.

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This is actually really great. My favorite part is:[quote=“MysteryMuffin, post:1, topic:23620”]
Creation, Time, and Life,Are legends to behold,Creation and Life make new things,And time never grows old.
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this is really nice

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Cool :thumbsup:

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Beautiful. :scream:

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Nice! Just a friendly suggestion, try messing around with a thesaurus while you’re writing (unless you already do). While your poetry is perfectly fine, intricate words will make your work seem “profound” in the eyes of others :smile:

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I try. (Chife, a new word I learned trying to rhyme)

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Let us never mention the results of this.

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