Just a couple things:
Murdering a royal messenger probably took things a little too far for the intended tone of the story (not to mention, grounds for execution in-universe). I’d recommend striking this from the RP.
I never stated that he was a graying old man. I planned for him to be around mid-40’s to early 50’s, since you don’t need to be old to have poor handwriting (just look at doctors…). Though, this isn’t exactly your mistake, since I never actually stated his age myself.