Jal's Superb Storytelling. (Saturday installments)

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So I've been talking about making this comic for a bit and I've finally decided to finish and post it (well not finish it.) I plan to upload a update once a week. (Most likely on Saturday.) So please enjoy Jal's Superb Storytelling:














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So now before you can criticize it I'm gonna go ahead and say this is probably my least favorite "issue" I've made in the series so far. Mostly because of how limited I was with space and characters, but do not fear it will get better. At least in my opinion.
Comments and Feedback are appreciated!

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Do they sell comets at that market?

I actually thought this was quite hilarious, especially the seller at the beginning.

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Add them here plox.

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I love how this small guy is bossing a big Toa around.

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What tool do you use to make the blurbs for the comic?

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@BBricks It's called comic creator (original right?) I've had it for years, just never used it.

Cool, thanks.

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Do you have to pay for it?

Nice. That would be awesome to get one day.

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Another one quit from Bionicle.