This is the latest version of Kalana, and honestly the one I’m most proud of. This is my only MOC so far that I’m actually happy with the way it looks.
Relating to this MOC specifically, I finally managed to make a female model and give her a unique body shape without making it poorly (and unnecessarily) sexualized. The first version is something I’d rather not talk about, and the second looked better but didn’t have much to set it apart from other female MOCs.
More generally, she has minimal gaps aside from the ones made by her hip armor and her color scheme is relatively consistent. Kalana has new custom arms that I’m rather proud of, even if its difficult to cover it with armor. The only real gripe I have with this is that her neck is really long and its kind of jarring.
Even if I can’t find many ways to improve this doesn’t mean it can’t be done. As always, criticism is always welcome!