Here is the next in my ancient disaster shogun series. His ability consisting of control over volcanoes.
Hope you like it.
Hope you like it.
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The piston add ons at the waist really do not fit.
I also think his arms are too long.
That crotch armor-thing needs to go. It looks really awkward. Also, maybe try a different shoulder design, they look to be too far back.
There’s some parts of this MOC that work, but all together the MOC doesn’t really flow. The upper part of the torso is very cluttered in some areas and the trans orange shells at the front give it a blocky look, plus the arms seem to be placed very far back. The addition of the piston armour on the crotch makes the lower part of the ribcage piece look thin, and overall, the silver looks out of place with the current colour scheme that the MOC has.
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I think you should flip the thigh add-on pieces upside down. It might improve the flow down to the crystal add-on.
The color scheme is far more consistent throughout and I like that.
Still not a huge fan of the foot spike, but for color distribution it works.
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i think i saw your other shogun, i have to say i like the snow themed one alot more
His waist is just to small. Otherwise the rest checks out.
I think the lower legs need work. They seem too short and unarmored to me