The backstory breaks canon. That’s really my biggest issue here. Other than that, he’s a bit bland in the way of color. Add a highlight, and you’re good to go.
6/10
Actually he was ORIGINALLY going to be energy, so…yeah. If it really bothers you guys, I can change it back! 
The red was supposed to act as one , but there’s not enough of it to be noticeable. Look at the hips.
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This bothers me more.
Okay, I’ve made my FINAL descision: he’s a toa of magnetism!