Originally a toa of ice but he defected after the rest of his team made him lose his arm in a fight. now works as a bounty hunter / assassin. Completely power obsessed and spent time getting Tenroujima just to make himself more powerful. Doesn’t work well with others since they only slow him down
I went with a mechanical phantoka look with him since I originally designed him as a cyborg with the claw replacing the original arm. He doesn’t have the shoulder cannons anymore though his claw does have one extending cannon in it. My only problem is that his upper legs are really too simple though anything else I tried limited the knee.
bit too much disproportion among his body. His torso and shoulders are blocks with his lower legs, and the limbs seem abit thin. Still nice and alright
The torso looks really well designed, but the limbs look kinda scrawny. If you could bulk them up a little that would do a lot for the MoC.
Also, this guy is 2legit2quit.
Jokes aside, though, this is a pretty solid MoC. I really like the lower legs, especially.
The feet and thighs are my only real issues–the feet seem cumbersome and overly large, though I like they way you used the claw piece, and the thighs, as others have said, are very scrawny, and could use an armor piece. More trans-blue might also help (perhaps on the thighs).
The torso, however, is awesome. I love the way it looks in the second and third pictures, with the way the wings are posed. It has a really cool, aerodynamic feel while also being bulky. The back is a little jumbled, but I can’t fault your for that, since my MOCs tend to be jumbled too. The weapons are great, though I feel the sword looks a tad strange because it ends with his hand. If it had more of a visible handle that emerged from the other side of his hand, it would look better, IMO.
Good job! Definitely an improvement over his first build!
Pretty decent though I personally think he pales in comparison with your other self moc(redacted for terrible pun).
My biggest concern with this guy is that he’s just sort of messy. I don’t really see where you’re going with his armor textures and gear; he looks like he’s covered in blades and jets just because he can be, not for any meaningful purpose. There’s also the issue of his stick-thin bits here and there. Those don’t help his look.
I don’t really couldn’t tell you what steps you should take to fix it without first knowing the look you were going for, so I guess that’s sort of on your part.
