Makuta Teridax re-imagined Moc (Pre-Betrayal)

hi there everybody im gonna start of this post by just giving some info about my moc, this was intended to be a version of makuta before or just at the start of his descent into darkness (hence no kraakahn as this was a time before he had donned the mask), i wanted to make him appear bright and as though he had not succumbed to his deranged sense of duty and had not spent time being corroded and degraded.

so onto the moc itself after a bit of concept maguffins,
next to tahu he appears fairly menacing although not completely malevolent

instead of wings he has a tattered cape damaged by embers from mask forges and rahi creation (i like to think over the years this became his wings)

under the cape he still has some decent shaping to his back

now onto one of my favourite yet least liked parts of the moc, the head. as i said in my intro i wanted to have this makuta be pre-kraahkan and to do that he needed a custom head. overall i like how the shaping worked out but i feel its just too big over all but i wanted to keep some of the shapes from the kraahkan to come through since the mask would later fuse to this head.

this is the best angle for it and at this angle i just love how it turned out

so now onto the torso, i took some cues from the maxilos robot set with the pistons but tried to keep the makuta aesthetic in tact and i feel i succeeded while gaining a decent amount of articulation including left, right, back, forward and also a decent range of swivel.

he even holds a kraata like in the film and set albeit upside down.

another thing i felt like i needed to get right were the legs, although i feel like the digit-grade legs would have been a byproduct of the corruption i wanted to include them because i love that style of leg and wanted to take a stab at it.

the onset of corruption has caused his once toa like normal hands into clawed hook fingers made for removing masks and bio organics.

thanks for looking at my post and i hope you enjoy my moc as it is the first bionicle moc i have made in an incredibly long time. please leave feedback and anything you liked about the moc as a whole.

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one problem
it does not have the Krakahn

Okay that somewhat makes sense
also the Legs are too skinny
Pros
The Manga Mat (1 point of for being a language I cannot understand)
Pretty Nice Body
the Shield on the back (why does that feel familiar)

Nice 6/10

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Um, well, why are the legs so thin? They look disproportional to the shoulders, other than that, great job and love the kraahkan.

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Very nice!
It definitely look like Terridax, even though it’s not as we knew him.
I feel it needs more black, though as the color scheme is kinda blank with just silver.
I think the legs need thickening up as well.

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@JonBlueFire thankyou, i really wanted to add more black but im trying to expand my parts library at the moment and didnt have the parts i needed in black. as stated in a post to whaddon im working on something to alter the skinnyness

@Kardax thanks man i am working on beefing them up, but i liked how they were at the moment. they look far better from other angles

@Whaddon im working on the beefing up of the legs and the idea was this is pre evil makuta or at least pre shadow makuta

@Oniwah yeah i agree with those point really need more black parts and metru red

@Hutere hahah i know ive said that ill be updating soon XD

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Other than the somewhat skinny legs, the MOC’s design is awesome, though I will say that it needs another colour, because currently the amount of silver on it make it look really plain.

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Pretty good, but the legs are a bit skinny.

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Actually Makuta Terridax always wore the Kraakhan… But good moc!

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Ditto on the legs, but otherwise it’s pretty nice.

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Dang great moc, though I think the upper arms are too small but the overall design is fantastic especially the head.

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The proportions are a bit wonky, but overall it’s great. I especially like the head. Good job!

The proportions seem odd, but I like the concept.

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I think he needs more colors, and I think his shoulders could be a little less broad. But honestly, this guy’s great! I like the way you incorporated the Rakshii back into the torso, nice throwback to the '03 set.