This first image is from about a moth ago when I was messing around with a new chest design and slightly updating 2.0
About a week ago I began work on upgrading Warp with a completely custom torso. (Still no gear function.)
This is the current version of my self MOC.
While I like each component on its own, with the thin frame combined with the just-as-wide-as-before shoulders, well…
It proportionally doesn’t work as well.
I’m likin’those legos on the body there.
I disagree. I think it looks better. And I like the head. The mask doesn’t fit the rest of the color scheme, but, as someone who once put a red mask on an all-black MOC, who am I to complain?
Those broad shoulders are godly, nice MOC. XD
-Oonie
I agree completely each part of the body does look cool the way the arms connect to the torso is… weird. Probably because of how you see just the ball joint sticking out like a sore thumb. Maybe if possible put some armor on the shoulders to bulk it up a little and to hide the arms but everything else looks cool. Also I LOVE the color scheme.
I’d stated that i didn’t like the broad shoulders before, but with the new torso, they’re even worse.
Otherwise, it’s a pretty decent moc.
Bring the shoulders in a bit and fill in the gaps between the shoulders and the chest and you’ll have yourself a right fine dandy MOC.
but still not as dandy as @Risebell
Disproportionately broad shoulders are Disproportionately broad.
I like the leg and body design. The upper legs are a little bit better in terms of proportions compared to the lower legs, which was a little bit of a problem with the first version. I’m liking the custom head, too, and it looks good with the sparkling Avohkii.
Preety nice moc… wait.
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Lateral bicep movement! Yay =P
But still, A TAKANUVA MASK! DISGRACEFUL!
I for one like the aesthetic you’ve got going with the body. It meshes in my eyes.
IDK but the original version looks better for me, nah… But I really like custom bones and stuff, good job!
Well 10 replies later I have fixed the shoulder things. I’ll post pictures later.
Don’t forget waist articulation.
Not today Rise.
Well done.
I like how you used the Vahki heads.
he lost weight. I’d take @Risebell’s selfmoc over this…
Still got a torso shaped like a capital T, but otherwise awesome. 
so, maybe move in those arms, extend the torso a lil bit, and it will be gr8
m8
