Mikara The Convict Of Kitan and Shadow Toa Trengot

[Whaddon]

"Rules Were Created So That They Can Be Broken"
Mikara is a Rougue Toa who was put into Solitary of The Kitan Prison But She Escaped with the help of a spirit of a Shadow Toa Trengot. She is right now roaming free in the Kitan Empire

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Front of Mikara

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Back of Mikara

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Front of Trengot

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Back of Trengot

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And a Pose in the style of the JoJo's Bizarre Adventure Anime Logo

[Booster_Gold]

More pictures would be great. :3

[Plural]

@Booster_Gold Yay. It's either an Inika Build Toa with some messed up arm or a hunk of CCBS next to a relaxing figure.

[Jemoph]

the rogue toa seems fine, if simple. The shadow toa seems like a beast. Is he a mutant or is it normal?

[Whaddon]

Well you See i was Thinking of making A MOC with Inspiration of one of my Favourite ANIMES JoJo's Bizarre Adventure so I went For the Idea of a Person Controlling a Spirit (STAND In the ANIME) and I Came up with A Badass Female Toa in a Prison Cell (Such as Jotaro in the First Episode But he was a Guy) and Trengot who she Controls and she can Only see (Such as Star Platinum) and that's how I got the Idea.

And about Trengot he was Halfway Transformed into a Makuta but he killed himself before he became one so that is why he looks Mutated

[squeaverking]

That sounds Pretty Cool. Can you Put some more Images of the MOC?

[Whaddon]

Here you go @squeaverking

[Plural]

Praise/Criticism:
Mikara
- Definitely looks like a Toa who would defect from her team
- Colo scheme is all over the place with two different shades of Dark Gray, Silver, and Black
- The arms feel a bit generic without armor or a more complex design
- I feel like the Blue/Red pins stick out a little too much.
- Feels pretty unarmored

I would give it a 4/10.
I would recommend trying to keep to 2-3 colors and add a little more armor.

Trengot

• I like the idea of meshing CCBS with the classic system
• Silver seems to stand out a little bit too much and also breaks the Black/Gunmetal Gray
• The head feels too big and doesn't really feel like one.
• The open sockets on the sides of the arms are distracting and a bit odd
• The Metru head could be filled up with an eye-stock.
• The Gray hands seems out of place

I would give it an overall rating of a 3.5/10.

I am sorry if I came off too harsh.

[Conduitt]

Looks great

[Looch]

Looks ok, I would rate it a 6-

Pose in the style of the JoJo's Bizarre Adventure

Never mind it's a 11/10 each

[Jemoph]

sees the changes

you've done us proud @Whaddon

you've done beautiful

[Calvatron]

title changed to reflect the contents properly

as for the MOCs, they seem basic. I don't like the arms on Mikara, and the head on Trengot is extremely awkward.