Mistah_Grammaticul's MOC topic

[Mistah_Grammaticul]

Wait, what?
I finally did it, guys!
I finally did it!
#FINALLYDIDIT!
Alright, a MoC topic. What better than start with my self-MoC, Pirean.

All will burn, under the power of light!

Yep, pretty normal protector-sized MoC. Here’s a front appearance:

Back shot:

Side-to-side:

Quick backstory:
Once a normal Matoran, Pirean fell into a vat of Energized Protodermis and Pit Mutagen. He emerged more powerful, and instead, went back to reading and writing. Did I mention he was an author/attorney before his mutation?

His primary weaponry is: a golden Greatsword and a golden Protosteel shield.

Reading Elements of Style (what I’m using to proofread):

Running into battle

I must continue on my quest to find my golden Hau. Goodbye.

I summon @Nyran to give me MoC advice!

[Greencapps]

so many weapons 0.o

[Mistah_Grammaticul]

Yeah, he equips like Tahu, double swords and all.

[Cordak_the_Cynical_Makuta]

Um…what is that?

[Jemoph]

kangaroo thing apperantly

[ColdGoldLazarus]

I love the swanky office-looking place!

Nice MOC, too.

[Ekorak]

Quite bulked out. For a rather simple MOC, he works well.

[Mistah_Grammaticul]

My hotel, apparently. I was in Australia, and I’m going back right now. Actually, this is in New Zealand.
In the meantime, @Nyran, can you give me advice?

[Nyran]

Uhh, I can confer with Matt on that one.

[Mittens]

This is definitely an interesting MOC. I just feel it’s a bit too busy. Maybe cut some of the weapons out, and it’ll be pretty good.

[DarkTakanuva]

It’s Scooby Doo as a kangaroo.

That thing is freakin’ me out.

The MoC is good, but that’s just weird.

[Tate]

@Mistuh_Grammaticul

@Nyran, can you give me advice?

Why do you keep in asking nyran for advice?
you should ask someone with actual experience and makes good quality mocs
Like ekorak, or ventum

(rektnyranwoo)

[Mistah_Grammaticul]

Well, they both gave me advice, so it’s fine, though I’ll be dropping a few weapons.
By the way, what’s YOUR opinion and advice?

[Tate]

I do not like the clashing of silver and gold, the weapons seem a bit odd, the skull spider is out of place, I do like his bulky appearance, although the way you connected the body to the arms seems awkward, and long.
also, get a better background, I suggest putting the moc itself against a wall, then taking pictures

Happy?
I gave you advice.
also, the post I made was a bit of sarcasm btw

[Mistah_Grammaticul]

Thanks! I dunno, I went for gold and silver mainly because that’s how I envision characters under the light element. The skull spiders will be changed to gold once I waste my money get three LoSSes. Sure, I have a background, but ya can’t do much in a hotel. Thanks anyways!

[Tate]

oh, light is moreso white and gold.

[Mistah_Grammaticul]

Hey, look at Kopaka the abusive. Too much gold.

[Tate]

too much gold?

look at rocka.

if anything, kopaka has the minimum amount of gold compared to sets like brutaka, and rocka.

[Creep]

Rocka the golden kopaka ? We don’t talk about him

[Mistah_Grammaticul]

A’right! Here we go with the new MoC I just created… Kranakas!

A murderous assassin, Kranakas was once a glorified warrior. However, being resurrected after 9002 years kinda makes you look malnourished.

In reality, he’s a table scrap, though I will keep him assembled.
OBS

Fine MoC, I say, though he’s pretty ugly.

Back in his grave, he looked like this:

Poses ‘n’ such:

Next up is… modified PIREAN!!

Updated with: Blue nipple loss.
To do: replace skull spiders in gold, add more gold to him, get a replacement gold Hau after I lost my first one in my backyard.

OBS:

A wild Krakamos appeared!

Wild Krakamos has fainted!

Fatality!