Mistress of Light

I would make the shoulders less broad and widen the hips a little. That should help.

Actually, you can leave the stand axle in and attach some pieces so the swords can attach there. That would solve both problems!

You could try and get either Pohatu melded mask. I would recommend Pohatu Uniter’s mask, as a lot of people have commented that it looks feminine and is gold/trans-neon green melded. If not, the mask that comes with Skull Scorpio is also a good option!

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While you’re right in that Gali definitely isn’t sexualized, it was the build of Gali - the use of the more curved torso shell, the lack of oversized armor or broad shoulders, the use of a weapon traditionally used by females in the past - that was able to set her apart as feminine. Giving her less wide shoulders and a nore streamlined torso could do wonders for giving off the vibe that she is female.

Will probably continue this later.

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Well, this wouldn’t be bad if it went under a few modifications. First, it’s not at all feminine, far more masculine. It doesn’t have the cleanest of color schemes either. If you fix up the colors, this could make a good male moc.

it’s suppose to be a female. i was tired of the fact that there is only one girl i the original toa team.

[quote=“PakariNation99, post:21, topic:19114”]
I would make the shoulders less broad and widen the hips a little. That should help.
[/quote]given how the torso is built,i currently have no idea how to narrow the shoulders, or how to widen the hips.

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Er OK

so

The yellows sorta clash with the gold, you should atleast choose one color of yellow… or maybe remove the yellow and go either classic gold n white or try something else like tan n gold or maybe yellow and white?

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@toaoftime1_ maybe if you could share with us the build we could possibly suggest ways to possibly make her more effeminate other than some armor removal and color balancing

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[quote=“PakariNation99, post:21, topic:19114”]
You could try and get either Pohatu melded mask. I would recommend Pohatu Uniter’s mask, as a lot of people have commented that it looks feminine and is gold/trans-neon green melded. If not, the mask that comes with Skull Scorpio is also a good option!
[/quote]maybe.there is a guy on eBay who is selling custom golden versions of the 2015 masks,including the protector mask.if i cant git that I’ll use your suggestion.

sure, any and all help is appreciated,though it’ll have to wait until tomorrow.

Uh

we’re talking about the melded Pohatu Masks that came in the sets

the 2016 Uniter Mask

The Skull Scorpio mask

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thank you. i will take this into consideration.

Some white pieces might look good. Overall, nice.

Not really feminine to be honest,but it looks good.

[quote=“White_Rainbow, post:16, topic:19114, full:true”]
Trans yellow would be the color included in waspix from HF, that color you used is the same as Pohatu’s which is trans neon green.
[/quote]that is one way of looking at it. another way is that the trans-yellow(neon green) is first light,the light from the very beginning of the universe,and over the millennia that light has seeped out and into the armor paneling,turning it transparent,and the light is shining out from within,turning it trans-yellow(neon green).

Idk, still looks bad to me. Nice explanation but, seems more like an excuse for the messy colors.

no offense but it feels like titan mata nui #2

gold and yellow for me does not match.

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The color scheme needs some work, particularly the burnt orange.

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O maa fogeeen gaad… BEAUTIFUL!

Just checked something else, those mata hands sticking out of the torso and the axle on the hip look really really awkward.

There’s a bit too many 2015 pistons

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I’m loving those custom feet! This thing almost reminds me of the old “Taka” leak with the color scheme. Which isn’t a bad thing. The keetorange is a biiiit weird, but there’s enough of it that I don’t mind all that much. Jetpack is super cool as well, love how you managed to store everything.
However… the real star of the show…
That stand

<img src="/uploads/db5640/original/3X/2/5/25ab3842cc5632fe8f1e5f72f2098b0e0de776e9.jpg" width=“500”

I couldn’t help myself.

But seriously, how did you build that? I want to use it on my lewa.

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