My First MOC (Update)

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This Moc is my first so please if you have any tips or advice please share. Its not the best but it could be better.

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this is him standing next to Pohatu.
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Epic Pose.
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This is the back of the moc.
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This is the back of his legs.
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These are his weapon.
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The side of the moc
If you need more pictures just Tell me and I will do my best
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Update!!!

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Here is the Newer version.

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Here he is from the side.

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here he is from the other side.

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I tried to pose him in an epic way.

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Here are the weapons. ignore optimus.

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Here he is standing next to Pohatu.

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Moved to Lego Creations

For a first try, it’s pretty great. :smile:

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Thank you! :smiley:

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Pretty good despite hidden asymmetry.

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I was limited on parts but i made do.

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Indeed you did.

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Im probably gonna work on it when i get home so it looks better.

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Hey that’s pretty good! Can’t wait to see more from you :slight_smile:

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Thanks😄

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I recomend beefing up the torso and lengthening the legs. currently he looks very top-heavy (if thats what you wanted him to look like then that’s fine also).

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Will do. Thanks.:smile:

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Really nice first attempt! Some guild building here!

I love how beefed up he looks, too!

My issues are that he has some mis-colored parts so he doesn’t have much of a color scheme, and when the knees are bent they are sort of gappy, but it still looks really good!

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Those legs are really well done. This is your first MOC? Wow.

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Great for a first try.

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Dang, this lookds pretty solid! Shoulders are a bit wide. Some of the textures clash a bit. I recommend selecting armour parts with similar aesthetics.

However, I highly recommend taking better pictures. Turn off your flash, use some good lamps, steady the camera with a tripod/stack of books and try to find a more neutral backdrop colour. :smiley:

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It looks great for a first moc, I just think it’s shoulders and arms are way too bulky.

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The back is dull and not enough detail; But not bad for a first try :slight_smile:

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Better than my first try :grinning:

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For a first MOC you’ve done well. I like this guy’s bulky look, but some areas like the waist and legs could use some improvment.