My Mask Hunter Moc

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Hello, this is my first MOC topic, constructive criticism would be nice.

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He is the Mask Hunter. He steals Masks of Power from the villagers and sometimes even the Mask Makers themselves! He was eventually put in prison for 1,000 years! When he was released he vowed revenge on Ekimu and the Protectors.

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Praise/Criticism:

  • Like the weapon storage
  • Claws were done well
  • The color scheme is pretty inconsistent, with Black, Silver, Light Gray and Gunmetal Gray
  • Multiple arms give the model a pretty clutter appearance
  • Color distribution is pretty bad, with Gunmetal Gray being focused onto the body, legs, and arms
  • Back of calves could have been covered
  • While the back is somewhat filled up, it looks pretty choppy

I would give this MOC a 5/10.
I like the idea of the MOC, but in execution, it could have gone better.

Needs Some Work :wink:

P.S. I’m sorry if my criticism was too rough

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It’s just another CCBS build, if you were to take off the armor it’s something that Lego has already done 30 times. Also it’s kind of a mess.

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@Sciencegiraffe He’s supposed to be a mess, covered head to toe with weapons. :stuck_out_tongue:

@PluralLego Thanks for the criticism, gave me some ideas. :grinning:

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Alright, updated version!

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Let me know what you think.

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Two thirds of my original critiques are now gone and he overall looks cooler, so I would give it the upgraded rating of an 8/10.

Great Job! :smiley:

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I liked the first one better… I dunno. Had more personality to 'im.