Onua, Toa of Earth, and Protector of the Subterran Lands

Here…He…Is!

I’ve always liked the idea of a more noble, refined looking onua. I think it fits his character for some reason.


Hammer closeup

I love how the chest/shoulder area looks

I don’t like how the waist area looks though…

So yeah here’s pretty much my first redesign of a preexisting character. Overall I like it. Thanks for viewing!

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Looks great! The CCBS works well here, and that hammer design is great, if a bit small. My only problem would be the square waist to the more triangular chest. Great MOC!

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Yeah, like I said I don’t like that area here. Thank you though!

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If there’s a way to flip it over and still keep it smooth I feel it may fit better, but at the same time, I can see ways for that to look off itself.

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You cold do that, but I think it also looks kind of detached from the top of the torso.

I can agree on that a bit, but for the most part 'e got it pretty smooth.

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Gracias.

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Looks pretty cool!

My issue is that the black is a little much. I think more color would suit him well. As said, the lower torso needs some work, and the hips are really thin and could use some covering of those ball joints.

The construction of the hips and torso isn’t bad, though! Really nice work!

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It looks really cool! But I would suggest getting a secondary color just to improve the color scheme.

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The shoulder pads are gunmetal. I semi-agree though. It does look a big strange without secondaries. Thanks for the comments!

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No problemo @EmperorDuckie!

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i think the hips and middle might need to be filled in a little

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Agreed. Thanks!

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this is ok, imo. nothing much. The add on in the middle needs to be removed and changed immediately though, it breaks up the flow and just looks plain bad

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I already disassembled it…

Well, might be a little late to give some input then. But I feel like the lower legs might need to be more bulky. (I’ve always disliked those black storm trooper leg armor pieces so it might just be me).

Thanks for the input!