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Not sure how to delete this if someone could help?

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She’s a pretty decent MOC, but the mammaries and thighs are a bit large, and the shoulders a bit too broad.

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Yeah I agree, though I did make this in 2 days so its still a work in progress

Taking the mata breasts to a whole new level

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haha, they do look a bit too big, will fix that me thinks

There’s plenty of way to make a MoC look feminine.
Giving it heels, boobs, and a, umm, behind is not one of the better options.

However, it’s pretty well built, and I like the aesthetic. She looks great next to Ryuu.

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The build is decent…but man, it just shouts oversexualizing to me…

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The whole idea was supposed to be a spoof of the mocs you see on Google, but yes there are some things ill be changing haha

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Oh.
In that regard it works.
With flying colors.

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Everything looks good, except those tridax pods.

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looks good. teridax pods draw too much attention with that color dunno if the orange ones would fix it maybe you could try and work in more trans neon orange and it would work.

I like them together

I did try the orange and was tempted to stick with them but I personally thought the blue looked better

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I can see that, the build is pretty good though :smile:

Yeah, there was two things in mind when I built this, 1) a spoof of mocs on google 2) a sort of succubus demon thing

fair enough

This looks really good, but as many have said “the tridax pods look a bit weird”. For the effect I think your going for, they don’t really have the right shape. Still even as is, this is a fantastic MOC.

Translucent bras?
you have a dirty mind XD

/s/s/s/s/s/s/s/s

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Hahaha:)

Going to have to agree with everything said here.

Well, in that case

…it’s just not horribly built with an edgy backstory and no desire for critique enough to be considered a G+ parody.

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Well… I like the head design.
But that’s about it, to be honest. The chest and thighs in particular need to not be there

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