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The beginning part (“No, I am not a deamon”) is a little confusing. I think you did good when you chose that point to end the second episode, but I think you should have repeated the white Rahkshi’s question here at the beginning of the third episode.
Also, the voices are a little awkward. You are talking like there are people outside the room and you are afraid that they could hear you. This heavily affects the quality of the voice acting. The fact that there is one guy for ten characters also doesn’t help.