the swords do look better now.
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Eh
It’s supposed to be waist armor
but now I can’t unsee that
Well, I wanted to convey a sort of feminine shape, but yeah the arms look a bit weird that way
Thank you
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Well, it does look feminine … in that it looks like a little girl. There are other ways to sell femininity in a MOC than a pencil-thin profile. Your torso is slender already enough to do that.
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Should I make the shoulders a bit broader then?
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Yeah, I would say the shoulders should be broader.
It looks like you used a five unit long axle, which puts it at the same size as the waist. I would say a seven or eight unit axle would look a bit more natural.
The waist armor has to go or atleast be changed, it sticks too much out in my opinion.
Other than that it seems to be pretty good.
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Ok
Hot take:
Alternatively, the slim figure sort of goes with her impulsive personality: Just because she LOOKS fragile doesn’t mean she IS fragile.
Also, Kavrin’s shoulders are the same width
Although slightly broader shoulders would fit an athletic figure like herself
B-but i like the waist armor…
Fine I’ll change it cuz it sticks out a bit
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boom more changes
Ok all I really did was get rid of the waist armor pieces, and also like one part on the swords.
Front:
Back:
Side view:
Sword:
yup there ya go
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she kinda reminds me of Jennifer from “The Christmas Light”
for some reason
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just the overall proportions seem kinda weird
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Like, how?
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she’s quite thin but also kinda round and has long arms and legs- actually maybe i’m thinking of Kiina, not Jennifer
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yeah probably
This makes more sense
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No, zorky is right 
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wait
on which comparison?
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Your moc.
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to which character
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Zorky is right that the moc is thin but also round and has disproportioned limbs.
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aahh
so the slizer foot pieces on the sides of the torso make it too round?
I can fix that.
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I think you can get away with those pieces, it’s just that shoulders are a bit narrow in comparison, perhaps widening them a bit would fix the proportion issues a bit.
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Yes but I like the narrower shoulders.
hmmm
I’ll have to play around in stud.io a bit to get the proportions right.
Other than that, though, do you guys like the rest of the moc?
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