Alright, this moc I actually have intact; so please leave suggestions on how to improve this one. Butcher it if possible, please. I’m fine with it being torn apart for sake of critique, we are living in a time where it is really easy to do so, and should be taken advantage of.
Just no scores. Please.
The Mocs mostly inspired by samurais, particularly more lightly armoured ones, though I wanted to see how I could use the cool protector masks.
The torso design is OK
The Greebling in the arms looks pretty bad
Open sockets in the middle look bad
The asymmetrical leg armor is meh
You caught red handed, you found my laziness of using the normal protector and torso build!
In all seriousness, I could easily cover up the open sockets, so that’s taken care of. With the arms, well, what would you suggest? I was trying to get the samurai "shoulder armour** look in that area, and I’m not sure of many other ways to execute it.
I’m going to work on a custom torso, and try to get the rest of it to follow through. Maybe I could change the ‘robes’ up a slight more.
Don’t really get the samurai inspiration
I saw the greeble pieces used for the arms and the protector mask, and tried to see what I could so with it.
Now that I’m thinking of it, I could get technic axles attached to balls attached to the empty ball joint for more greebles. woah!
@Maethorneth could probably say something about how Samurai-esque this looks, if he were active. Anyway. The only things I have to say right now are that I wish it had a more interesting color scheme.
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I’m sorry, you seem to have uploaded the wrong creation? I don’t see any samurai here…
/s
=P seriously though, if he is supposed to be a samurai, he needs to look more like one. Skirt armor is a must, the shoulder technique could work, however cover with a smooth piece, as was suggested before. He needs more color as well. I suggest more purple, and maybe some yellow highlights.
I’m going to work on some more trams purple around the place, along with the gunmetal and black. I’d go with yellow but would probably end up looking messy.
Need to get them haikates working…
@Chronicler Ah but it takes a bit less than common sense to read the rules!
I think its a pretty good protector sized MOC, the custom arms and body are nice (Blue pin needs switching to black) but other than that there is not too much to denote this as a Samurai other than the weapon and posing… Might suggest doing something to add more of a samurai feel to the character.
I had actually just “remade” the moc now, but then I got carried away and made it a lot bigger, and added lots of translucent colours to it. It barely looks anything like a samurai now. I’m posting it soon enough once I bother to take photos of it.