Self MOC: Jakami, Toa of Gravity (WIP)

Extremely WIP Self MOC. Still need to improve the legs and not steal Lewa's gearbox, but here he is:


So what do you think?

EDIT: Obligitory side shot

Obligitory back shot

Obligitory Metroid-esque arm cannon shot

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More pics would be good, but the chest-mace looks bad.

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It was the closest thing I had to a purple chestplate. Any suggestions for other pieces?

-legs are ok
-no armor on thighs
-i like the gun
-dagger is not needed
-chest mace is weird
-I like the barraki mandibles
-I like the shoulder armor
-Protector mask is overu- I mean you want some tacos

Put on some more armor, make a better weapon, take out the chest mace thing, and put on a new head/mask. It needs work, but it's a good start.

That's not a flaw.

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Have you tried the basher rib cage?

Don't have Basher yet.

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Maybe you can try using a protector gun like Korgot. It's un-original, but it's worth it if it looks better.

It's more of a pet peeve of mine.

Still, I don't think it's enough to warrant being called a flaw.

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If he had a short number of pieces, I'd understand comepletely. I don't have a lot of pieces, either. I'm just not very used to seeing a lot of mocs using protector masks.

If he likes it, he likes it. Personal preference and all that.

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It's also supposed to be an Arthron.

Then it gets that across very well.

Ooooooohhh
I get it

Plural's Quick Review:

  • Color Scheme is somewhat consistent
  • Body proportions are strange
  • Don't like the mace chest
  • Legs are spindly

I would give this MOC an overall rating of a 3/10.

Needs Alot of Work grimacing

Alright, from everyone's suggestions, here's what I'm working on:

-More armour

-Better weapon (nearing completion)

-System chestplate

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Can't wait to see it!

How does a small hammer sound for his weapon?

Sounds great!