SELF MOC: Jemoph TITAN mark 8: Back in black

Jemoph · July 22, 2015, 4:36am

moar because I felt like it and I don’t mind any critique about it’s flaws

unlike previous incarnations, I don’t really plan much melee-based things with this variation. I also decides to make more custom lower arms and a better chest and slightly tweaked upper arms

yeah yeah, no gimmicks yeah yeah lame

critique and Comment.

DrNuparu · July 22, 2015, 4:42am

Wow. This MoC is good. Definatley better than anything that I could build.

Nyran · July 22, 2015, 4:42am

Either you’re just not good at posing, or those legs just flay out too awkward.

Can’t say I’m a fan of the whole “legs coming down from body” building technique you seem to like so much.

If you’ve ever looked at the human skeleton, you can see that the thighs/hips come out from more the sides of the pelvis than anything.

Jemoph · July 22, 2015, 4:43am

I don’t pelvis enough

and somehow I’m a fan of the legs. For whatever reason it seems right to me

Nyran · July 22, 2015, 4:45am

http://board.ttvpodcast.com/uploads/db5640/optimized/3X/5/c/5c22bf71f08bc0df9ca0d74d55365d9b1c626526_1_375x500.JPG

Look at this picture for a while and then tell me that again.

Jemoph · July 22, 2015, 4:45am

still looks fine

… on second thought I’ve been looking at too many poses that defy human logic

Nyran · July 22, 2015, 4:52am

I take it you didn’t notice how his shins bend out awkwardly as if someone had broken his legs, or that he’s attemtping some sort of strange, knee-based splits.

Jemoph · July 22, 2015, 4:54am

well since he has bell bottoms his legs need to be splayed apart. mostly like an A, though I guess I could upgrade the legs when I have time…

Payinku · July 22, 2015, 4:54am

this is a downgrade.

stop pulling a google.
you’re changing things that don’t need to be changed.

Jemoph · July 22, 2015, 4:56am

…I can’t remember some designs

I can only keep going

Plural · July 22, 2015, 5:07am

Praise/Critique:

An overall consistent color scheme of black,silver, and gray
Extremely bulky, which I personally like
I like the utility belt, but the lack of weaponry makes me wonder why it’s there
I don’t know if this is an issue in posing or not, but the legs seem to tilt outwards a bit too far.
The arms seem to be a little too long for the body
exposed axles and pins
The head seems to be a little too far back compared to the chest
The gap in between the Legs is too far apart

I give it a 6/10.
You have a nice idea going on, but it needs some work. (Sorry if I come off as rude )

Jemoph · July 22, 2015, 5:07am

it’s EXTREMELY Deserved

Hawkflight · July 22, 2015, 1:37pm

He’s too big

Anything and everything bad about him (well, except for the bland color scheme) originates from this.

Downsize him a little (or a lot) and try again.

Adazai · July 22, 2015, 3:20pm

We have a Reploid here.

Ekorak · July 22, 2015, 5:15pm

This is the part where he got good, and then you threw him off a mountain.

I literally don’t know where to start.

I won’t give my actual thoughts unless you ask, because I don’t know how much devastation you want.

MT_Zehvor · July 23, 2015, 4:13pm

Let’s stick to constructive criticism, guys.

Saying that you dislike something user created on this boards and mentioning how it could be improved is one thing. Calling something trash and spending your whole post mocking it is another.

-MT

Da_Stronk_Destroyer · July 23, 2015, 5:41pm

Shoot me, but I really like it! he looks like a little guy in a huge suit. the arms are sweet, I just feel he needs some big shoulder pads. maybe use the piece on his chest. now the feet…are good.