Self MOC- Korahnu, Master of Iron

This is my first MOC so I thought it might as well be a self-moc.
This is Korahnu, Mater of Iron.
I was always a fan of the Fe-matoran and the pakari in orange so I decided to base my self moc around the mask and colour scheme.





Ive not got any back story yet but I like to think ill work him into the Okoto region some how.
Any critique will be gladly welcomed. smiley

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Noice. I like the bulky look smile

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I like him! However, there's no orange on the arms.

8./10 for color distribution

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Plural's Quick Review:

  • Color Scheme is Consistent
  • Kind of a Bulk-Master
  • Has a pretty hefty Backpack
  • Color Distribution is Meh
  • Back of feet are kind of gappy

I would give this MOC an overall rating of an 8/10.

Great Job! smiley

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I think those are supposed to be spurs.

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I meant right above them... There goes me not being descriptive enough again...

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I know what you meant. I just don't think an accessory has to be gapless. :wink:

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Hey, thanks for quick replys.
@SwagMeister I couldn't source size 5 armour in orange so I had to use blackon the arms frowning
@Plural They are spurs at the back, theyre attached with rubber 2-by lift arms and I couldn'get round the gappy-ness. Also his head is built right into his torso, so his backpack is actually his body smiley
@helryx Thanks smiley

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This looks cool! Awesome work!

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Ironic that the iron colors are orange and grey.

not bad for a first moc.

lookin alright

This is great! I really like it!

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Nice! You don't see too many Fe-matoran around these days.

The build seems fairly solid, and I like the 'harness' look achieved with the orange parts on the torso. The colour distribution is fairly good, although the arms could do with a bit of orange. The elbows seem a bit thin, and the technic look of the lower arms doesn't really match anything except the feet. Which brings me to the spurs on the back of the feet. I love them. Weapons are fairly basic, but they still look nice.The upper chest printing seems to break up the colour scheme. I would like to congratulate you in particular of your avoidance of red and blue pins! (at least as far as I can see)

I'd give this about a 7/10. Great Job!

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[Stares Straight at MOC] You poor, poor Soul.

nice job

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Sadly, I don't find this MOC worthy of my catchphrase of, "The Bulk!".

But I still like it all the same!

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Cowboy [SM]

Auto 10/10

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Good moc. I like the orange jet engine, thruster, mistika rocket things.

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Looks pretty awesome for how simple it is.
I love the little wheel things behind his feet.

Wow, this is really good for your first MOC!