This is my first moc in about a year and a half, so maybe I could have done better. I tried to make the build as complex as possible but I couldn’t do anything about the arms and upper legs since I was running out of parts. Positive feed back and constructive criticism only, please!
The head isn’t the most original,but other than that it’s a pretty good MOC
Plural’s Quick Review:
- Color Scheme is OK
- Torso looks interesting
- Wings look meh
- Top of calves are too thick
I would give this MOC a 6/10.
Needs a Bit of Work
It’s time for a quick KARP/10 review. (K.A.R.P. Kool, And, Rad, Playa!)
Is it Kool And Rad? Yes. Good work Playa!\
I give it a KARP/10
This is Fantasti-cool™! Nice job! Sure, the Rahkshi head isn’t original, but it looks good on this moc! 9.8/10
You’re SO picky when it comes to wings.
I’m da King of Descriptive!
No. No. No. Fantasticola™ is my thing. Fantasti-cool? I’m pressing copied-right-in-fridge-mint charges on you.
We need some sort of course of lawn. Like. A golf course.
Nah, man. I’ve been doing Fantasti-cool™ for a long time.
Ahem, thats Fantasti-cool™.
But, it’s a trademark.
Like, a court of law? Kahi isn’t here.
Oh, that sounds fun!
But how long?
A court of law, in witch we play golf to settle any and all problems.
3 days, 4 hours, and 39 minutes.
So be it. I’ll go grab my grass, sand and CAT excavator.
I don’t know why, but my first thought reading this was “He’s getting drugs?” Then I realised, “OH! For the golf course.”
Yeah, sorry. Forgot how psychoactive and addicting CAT excavators can be.
eh… decent. This your first time?
The limbs could use a bit of work, but the torso is cool!
Needs mire upper torso armor and less center torso armor, so he looks strong and not fat.
Since other people name their reviews, I’ll call mine… Clone’s Critiques:
I really like the color scheme, although the dark-blue wings look a bit odd. The upper legs and arms are bland, but the wings and torso are pretty cool.
Hmmm… Back when I did super in-depth Pro & Con reviews I called them my “Totally Not Ripping Off Eljay” Review.
Something feels nostalgic about this.
No, but it has been a long time since I last built a moc