[Self MOC] Whaddon The Rebirthed Swordsman of Death (but he does not know that yet)

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“So let me guess a Rahi slaying sword or an Argathian Tool of War?”

“I don’t know but we can find out”

“How?”

“Pick up that sword right there and see what happens”
A random mercenary Toa to Whaddon

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Back story
Once a terrifying Titan unknown to many destroyed entire Islands of Lunnaria with a single slice of his sword Rebirth.

When he was defeated they say his strength went into a random Toa alongside his sword.

It went into a Body of a yound Toa named Whaddon destined to destroy the entirety of Lunnaria. But he does not know that yet and instead roams Lunnaria searching for something to fight.

Specifics
Element: Blades Don’t worry if it is not an Element but it is in my Canon

Colour scheme: Darkish Grey, Metru green, Silver and Black

Personality: Think of a Mix between Guts from Beserk and Kid Goku from Dragonball NOT Z

Close Up

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Front

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Back

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This is his sword Rebirth

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Though this is its unpowered state he can unleash enough power to get in into its fist form

UNBOUNDED REBIRTH

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A blade which to his semi farther (the Titan) is a simple dagger
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but hey

at least he can Wield it

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He’s kinda basic. The body build is interesting, but there isn’t much there, and he’s lacking in color. I would suggest a more complicated build, more green, and maybe a highlight color.

4/10

Those weapons are pretty great though.

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Agile, but awkward in some areas.
Still a decent job.

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Was the (but he does not know that yet) really necessary?

Other wise, he’s thin. Really thin. Color distribution isn’t too good. Meh.

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We have a term for these kinds of characters:
Mary Sue.

The MoC isn’t that great, but that sword is pretty nice.

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Nice work. It is a bit bare in places but that torso build is really nice. try working with the proportions a bit and work on filling him out.

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Kind of bland, not to mention super skinny. Mocs with a torso consisting of 9 pieces usually don’t go well.

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Pretty basic in build terms. Colors are good, sword is also good, but the overall MOC lacks a certain flair. I hope you improve this to something great.

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Well, I was going to ask if this was inspired by Ragna, but then I saw this. The backstory is somewhat similar.

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Oh yeah didn’t think of that
And the unpowered version of his sword does look like his sychte

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Cool dude. But just a little skinny in the torso area, but it’s an intresting design choice. The sword is AMAZING though. I’ve been trying to make a good sword for my self moc too but haven’t gotten really that close yet.

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Is this what I’m looking for? :stuck_out_tongue:

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no Whaddon rework
http://board.ttvpodcast.com/t/whaddon-rework-first-rework-of-the-year/16747

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And people hated my self MOC for having a Hau (I don’t care if this one is old grey, they’re still the same in my book)… Well, unlike the others, I enjoy this MOC quite a bit. The bulk on him is little, bit you’ve gotta admit, that torso design is pretty original. The simplicity on him is good. If I were you, I would stick to this style of build, except progressively get more complex in later versions. 6.25/10 for me. (I was leaning towards a 6.5) Nice work, and keep it up.

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