Hope you guys like him! If you want to know how stable he is, I can put him in running poses, on one leg, ext.
I know the purple add-on on the thigh May bother some people, but I don’t care.
Backstory:
An android from outer space, he fights intergalatic bad guys with his own group members, Strytos, Claredon, Gauznip, and T-105! (Need to build Some of them.)
Leave some “support” and “constructive criticism” please down below! I’d appreciate it.
Let’s go to change.org and overthrow the community
This is a pretty legit MOC. The custom bits like the legs and torso look great and your use of system parts compliments the model, all the while keeping a coherent style.
nice self moc. Shaping’s nice, though the color placement seems sparse or, atleast to me somewhat in unfamiliar areas, but he looks great n all. Really looks like a great representation
I can tell a lot of time and careful thought went into making this. I like it a lot, has a lot of character, which i think is the most important part of a selfmoc. I rather enjoy the colour scheme too and the build looks solid. Nice work man, and i hope you enjoy your time on the boards
Quite the contrary I’d say. A lot of miniature groups form but the people generally know most other active members.
Any who, moc looks quite nice. I like the shoulder region but can’t help but feel the legs are too large by comparison to the torso and arms, may just be the angle. The knee could benefit from some extra coverage as part of it dips down and looks somewhat odd, but otherwise I’d say you’re fine. Some additional color might help to spruce things up, though I’m sure you’ve heard that elsewhere.
(Not that I have much room to speak there. :P)
Dude this is a fantastic moc.
I love everything about it except for the head, I’m not sure how to feel about the head.
The colours work great together, the proportions are nice (although the torso may be a little to long), the custom legs looks amazing. Everything just seems to flow together so well!
What’s up. I’ve been following you on instagram and was wondering when you’de join the boards. This has been one of my favorite selfmocs. (This is Luke Staten by the way)
Anyway, the MOC’s pretty alright. Really screams “MOCPAGES!” in styling, especially in the waist, but he’s got a strong (but also markedly generic) silhouette, he’s pretty smooth, and the color blocking would be easy to fix. I do spot that his arms seem a bit long for him, or at least not bulky enough to match his legs and torso, and his entire structure is admittedly quite bulky. Also, might just be me, but the flatness of the upper body is a bit off-setting, but again I’m not 100% sure about that.
Most impressive thing here is probably the leg design, since it’s quite smooth, but I could definitely see something going beneath the knee armor, as it’s a bit of an empty gap right now.
Lastly of the stuff that sticks out to me immediately are the hips and hands. The hands, although a classic design…they seem hilariously spindly when compared with the rest, because there’s nothing on the back of them. Nitpick at best, but they really just don’t fit the rest of the design.
The hips though…why anybody uses the Vahki waist and Metru armor combo, I will never know. It doesn’t cover the whole thing and leaves this hideous gap at the bottom. This isn’t just this MOC, of course, it’s every MOC to have used it for the last, what, ten, twelve years?
All in all it’s a really good start, just needs some touching up. I do really like the colors by the way, just wish there was a bit more of the trans-green sprinkled around so it wasn’t so inconsistent.
This looks pretty good! my only issue would be the rather bland Breakout chestplate. It does not distract per say…but it does not feel like it matches the superb styling of the rest of the MOC.
The whole thing is constructed pretty well, though as Ek said it kinda screams MOCpages, and for the hand gappiness problem I suggest moving the Tbar to the other side and putting a 2x1 plate over the vents, it does stay on mostly and a bigger tire around the wrist.
It leaves a tiny gap at the bottom, how is that a hideous gap, we aren’t talking about Tahu 2015’s legs are we?
It’s so obvious, at least to my eye. It’s an ugly section that is easily avoidable through alternative waist constructions or armoring. It irks me no matter how many times I see it or how it’s done. If it’s on a MOC…I’m gonna mention it in my critiques.
Also, don’t get me started on BIONICLE sets. I could rip those to shreds for hours on end if I needed to.
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